miércoles, 20 de mayo de 2015

Writing short stories

In the language class, we read the theory for writing short stories. with that information we made a chart including important points to take into account when writing one. Here I upload my chart. I worked with Jimena.











Then we had to do the practice and we had to write an story that started with the phrase Mark couldn´t believe his good luck.

Mark couldn´t believe his good luck, first when he was singing in the streets, one of the one direction singers, heart him and he wanted Mark to be part of the band. At the beggining he couldn´t believe it since it was a great opportunity. However it has bad things, for example, you have no privacy.


- Oh my god! You´ve a great voice. Nevertheless, you've to work on it. Said Harry.
- Thank you! Said Mark.
- Do you want to be part of our band? Asked he.
- I don't know, I've to think about it. He answered.

All in all he accepted.

Second, when they were in the sing competition, they won and as a result he was millionaire. And third once he was totally famous, his manager offered him to record his own CD instead of doing it in group.


Ideas to improve your informal email

In Language we had to read about informal emails. And then, we made a chart summarising the text. Here I show you ours. I worked with Jimena.









Then we had to write an E-mail answering to a previous one.

From: Sophie
To: Tom
Subject: Creating a blog.

Hi Tom,
Very well! And you? Well, I´m studying a lot. I´m very tired.

Yes! Of course I remember. I think the you want teenagers to read it, you should write about books, films, sports, soap operas and put on teenagers shoes. You can also write tips and pieces of advice at the time of studying.

Currently I´m workingt on an online newspaper, I do the design part. Sure!! I´ll help you with the design of the work. We can arrange a date and we talk through skype so I show you my ideas.

About the printer, I advice you to buy it in Garbarino. Things there are cheap and they´re good quality.

Good luck,
Sophie.

Tips to write an article

In the language class we worked with the writing theory and practice of articles. We made two charts with tips to kown how to write it. Here you have them. I did them with Jimena.












Here you have our article:

LEARNING A SECOND LANGUAGE

Now a days, is very common and necessary to learn a foreign language. Studying a new language brings many advantages in life.

There are many advantages when you know a different language. You can have the opportunity of working or studying abroad, you can communicate  with people from other countries, such as going to the super market while you are travelling in another country.

Other advantages that can help you if you study, travel, work or live in another country is that you are abel to do everything you want in your daily life without any difficulty. You can understand the country's cultures, traditions and signs. This makes your life, travel, etc easier and enjoyable.

Althought is not easy, to learn a second language is very helpful. Would you try it?


Then we had to search for an article that we liked and so a summary.

In class we had to search an article and I choose this one:





Here is the summary:


Jhonny Depp injures his hand on set of "Pirates of Caribbean"

The well known character Jack Sparrow starred by Jhonny Depp, injured his hand shooting while he was acting for the film in Australia last week, as a consequence he had a surgery.

The premiere is on july the 7th, 2017. The directors of the movie are Espen Sandberg and Joachim Rooning.

lunes, 18 de mayo de 2015

Estudiamos a nuestro eje, el sistema ósteo

En la clase de biología fuimos al laboratorio y en grupo hicimos una disección a un fémur de vaca cortado a lo largo. Fotografiamos desde distintos ángulos las fotos y luego con el programa de edición de fotos, Skitch de evernote, reconocimos las distintas partes del hueso y las señalamos. Conmigo trabajaron Delfina Uquizu, Valenina Muguelar, Martina Safronchik y Jimena Timpanaro. Les comparto el trabajo realizado.


domingo, 3 de mayo de 2015

Encuestando a la salud

En matemática, estamos trabajando con estadística y junto a la profesora de biología que también es nuestra profesora de TICX, se nos ocurrió hacer una encuesta sobre temas de salud. Así es como nos están quedando las preguntas, igual falta pulirlas....


ENCUESTA

Población: Alumnos de secundaria y 6to año de primaria.
Muestra: Los que entren a la página y contesten a encuesta.

  •  Edad
  • Sexo
  • ¿Cuántas veces al día te lavas los dientes?
  • ¿Qué desayunaste hoy? 
  •  ¿Prácticas deporte fuera del colegio? SI/NO ¿Dónde? CASA/CLUB/OTRO 
  • INDIVIDUAL/GRUPAL- ¿Qué deporte? ¿Cuántas horas por semana?
  •  ¿Cuántas materias te llevaste el año pasado?
  • ¿Cuantas horas dormis por día?
  • ¿Comes frutas? ¿Cuántas por día?
  • ¿Traes peine a la escuela?
  •  ¿Tuviste lesiones el año pasado?
  • ¿Cuántas veces a la semana comes comidas rápidas?
  • ¿Traes cepillo de dientes a la escuela?
  •  ¿Usas protectores propio del deporte que prácticas?
  •  ¿Dónde almorzás? ESCUELA/ CASA/ OTRO LUGAR
  •  ¿Cuántas horas diarias le dedicas al estudio fuera del colegio?



miércoles, 26 de noviembre de 2014

An Essay on Gay Marriage

In the subject of Em/History Writing, we were working on For and Against Essays and after discuss the topic, in groups we had to write one choosing a topic that we wanted.

This is our essay:

Did you know that nowadays gay marriage is much common than before? Gay marriage means that people from the same sex can get together and marry. In Argentina since July the 15th 2010, gay marriage is allowed. Argentina is not the only country in which gay marriage is allowed. France, Canada, Spain, Mexico, United States, Great Britain, Uruguay, South Africa, among others also had a legal recognition of gay marriage.

There are many advantages to gay marriage. Allowing gay marriage in countries makes the government have a more open-minded way of thinking. If they want, gay people can get married and that makes them happy because people respect their choices since the day gay marriage was allowed in 2010. The situation made them realize that things were changing for better, people were starting to accept gay people.

The most important disadvantages to the gay marriage are that people can be discriminated by someone who does not agree or gay's families may not accept their feelings. Another main disadvantage is that, in the street, people who disagree can hurt gay people emotionally or physically. Most of gay people have a very hard life because bad people made bullying to them, only because they are gay.

As a conclusion, gay marriage is a big demonstration that the world is changing, people are starting to have an open mind and society is changing. People are starting to think about others and realize that we are equal even though we like different things.





viernes, 21 de noviembre de 2014

An essay on "The Strange Case of Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde"

In the class of L/L writing we worked with Literary essay. After reading the theory and examples, we wrote our Literary essay on "The strange Case of Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde". I worked with Jimena Timpanaro.


An essay on “The Strange Case of Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde”

The novel “The Strange Case of Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde” written by Robert Louis Stevenson, is about an honorable doctor called Henry Jekyll, who is interested in the double personality of human being. Finally, he creates a potion to reach his aim, but the results he gets are not the expected ones. In this essay the topics to be analyzed will be the main themes, which they are The Duality of Human Nature, The Importance of Reputation and The Innocent and The Guilty.

Throughout the novel the theme Duality of Human Nature is developed. This theme emphasizes the two personalities a human being has, the good and the bad one. As Jekyll creates a potion to separate them, his goal is to create two personalities. But he transforms the good in bad and that is how, the bad part becomes dominant. Hyde is an amoral creature. Yet, if he was an animal he would not live in an urban place or act as a human. “…It was on the moral side, and in my own person, that I learned to recognize the thorough and primitive duality of man”.

The second main theme that is analyzed is The Importance of Reputation. During Victorian era, reputation was very important. But, to have reputation you must avoid gossiping, with others. To gossip was not for people from the upper classes; the ones who did it were not well seen. Utterson and Enfield have a reputation so, they avoid gossiping when they talk about the story of the door. “I am ashamed of my long tongue. Let us make a bargain never to refer to this again”.

The last theme to analyze is The Innocent and The guilty. This novel has many violent scenes. In most of them the culprit is Hyde and the victim, an innocent person. Sir Carew and the little girl are both victims of Hyde. But in the end of the story, Hyde’s victims are both Jekyll and Hyde when he finally commits suicide. Neither of the victims are innocent, both of them do wrong things. “And next moment, with ape-like fury, he was trampling his victim under foot, and hailing down a storm of blows, under which the bones were audibly shattered and the body jumped upon the roadway”.

In “The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde”, the author focuses on these three themes. As a conclusion, we may say that the themes analyzed in this essay are developed all along the novel, and they are very important to it. Without them, the novel would not create a strange and mysterious feeling in the reader. These themes are not common in novels, they are original and that is what makes this novel very special, sophisticated and traditional.  

The novel

 

Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde


Enfield and Utterson gossiping


Mr Hyde killing Sr Carew


Mr Hyde mistreating the little girl